Feedback From Our First Pitch

This is the feedback we got from our media teacher about the pitch of our film. There was both negative/ positive comments but i would say most things were more positively commented on. we got a rating of 3 stars meaning he would definitely come and watch our film.

The elements he liked the most were the narrative and thought our age rating of 15 was appropriate.

The things we need to work on for our final draft of our pitch is images to some slides to make it more visually appealing, also the narrative needs to be shortened and bullet pointed making it easier to read and understand. Finally we should start to mention what we want in our title sequence giving creative and detailed examples of this, also the budget of our film needs amending with a re look into the casts roles.

Feedback from first pitch

This is the feedback we got from our class mates when pitching the idea of our film to the class for the first time. They overall really like the name of our film and also liked the concept behind it. However some of them found it a little hard to see how our budget and profit would work out and also the actors we chose for certain roles they felt could be switched round. So therefore we need to make the changes that are necessary.